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God is in the Rain by ~blackroseless:iconblackroseless:





I want to pull the trigger tight,
Just to feel the pain.
The storm is growing wild inside,
But God is in the rain.

The thunder will begin to crash,
It's driving me insane.
and It could end quick as a flash,
But God is in the rain.

The storm won't subside,
My heart weather-stained,
I'd lay down and die,
but God is in the rain.

My heart is broken, weathered and torn,
and here I lie, ashamed.
Before I die, remember why
It's beautiful when it Rains.
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This may sound like a suicide note, but it isn't. I don't have the guts for suicide, and I think it's a good thing. I have so much left to live for, so many things I haven't experienced yet, so I'm willing to wait 'till my time comes.

I'm also not religious, but I remembered the quote from 'V for Vendetta' "God is in the Rain" so, CoLoR Me iNSPiReD...

I am in NO way supporting suicide, just expressing my right to write emo poetry...

Listening to: Black Orchid - Blue October [link]
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:iconvividdesiredlove:
I like it.
It's interesting how angry clouds can look so much alike.
"Government should always be afraid for their people"- V for Vandeta

--
This Hopeless Romantic
Found her love.

I won't let it go ever.

Happiness.
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V: [Evey pulls out her mace] I can assure you I mean you no harm.
Evey Hammond: Who are you?
V: Who? Who is but the form following the function of what and what I am is a man in a mask.
Evey Hammond: Well I can see that.
V: Of course you can. I'm not questioning your powers of observation I'm merely remarking upon the paradox of asking a masked man who he is.
Evey Hammond: Oh. Right.
V: But on this most auspicious of nights, permit me then, in lieu of the more commonplace sobriquet, to suggest the character of this dramatis persona.
V: Voilà! In view, a humble vaudevillian veteran, cast vicariously as both victim and villain by the vicissitudes of Fate. This visage, no mere veneer of vanity, is a vestige of the vox populi, now vacant, vanished. However, this valorous visitation of a by-gone vexation, stands vivified and has vowed to vanquish these venal and virulent vermin van-guarding vice and vouchsafing the violently vicious and voracious violation of volition.
[carves V into poster on wall]
V: The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous.
[giggles]
V: Verily, this vichyssoise of verbiage veers most verbose, so let me simply add that it's my very good honor to meet you and you may call me V.
Evey Hammond: Are you like a crazy person?
V: I am quite sure they will say so. But to whom, might I ask, am I speaking with?
Evey Hammond: I'm Evey.
V: Evey? E-V. Of course you are.
Evey Hammond: What does that mean?
V: It means that I, like God, do not play with dice and I don't believe in coincidences.

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"The best trick Hell has to play against its inmates is to whisper to them that this — this now — is the bottom. Nothing can be worse than this. And then to pull the floor away." - Daniel Abraham "Flat Diane"

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:iconvividdesiredlove:
heh I adore that movie
the actor and how he played the character he was flawless

--
This Hopeless Romantic
Found her love.

I won't let it go ever.

Happiness.
:iconblackroseless:
He was SO amazing!

--
"The best trick Hell has to play against its inmates is to whisper to them that this — this now — is the bottom. Nothing can be worse than this. And then to pull the floor away." - Daniel Abraham "Flat Diane"

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:iconvividdesiredlove:
that he was .
I do wish he was in more movies though.

--
This Hopeless Romantic
Found her love.

I won't let it go ever.

Happiness.
:iconblackroseless:
I KNOW!!!! HE SHOULD BE!

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"The best trick Hell has to play against its inmates is to whisper to them that this — this now — is the bottom. Nothing can be worse than this. And then to pull the floor away." - Daniel Abraham "Flat Diane"

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:iconlovinthevamps:
Lovely poem, even though I too am not religious.

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“If it makes you happy, it makes me happy, and what makes us happy is none of the worlds damn business” :heart:
:iconblackroseless:
:nod: I know.. its a not religious poem about god... does that make ANY sense?

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"The best trick Hell has to play against its inmates is to whisper to them that this — this now — is the bottom. Nothing can be worse than this. And then to pull the floor away." - Daniel Abraham "Flat Diane"

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Ya, it does. God can be more than a religious figure, He can be a symbol of hope, faith, etc.

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“If it makes you happy, it makes me happy, and what makes us happy is none of the worlds damn business” :heart:

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